Sunday, January 25, 2009

Dear Mr. Obama, (2)

Dear Mr. Obama,

I would like to say congratulations on your presidential election. It must feel good. Being President is a big responsibility and you have many things to look forward to. Changes need to be made, and the people are looking forward to you making them. The most important things you should start with are the war on terror, the economy and education.In my opinion, the war on terror is the most important issue to focus on at the moment.

While George W. Bush was president, he sent troops to Afghanistan and Iraq. Many people died. As president, I feel that you should bring our troops home. You should also do your best to discourage terrorism so everyone can feel safe. It would also decrease the amount of racism in the world and create a more united state of mind for people everywhere.

As the United States’ president you should know that our economy is on the down fall. People are saying that it mirrors the Great Depression. Many people are out of work, can not afford food, clothes or shelter. I personally know a few people who have lost their jobs because of budget cuts and lay-offs. Those people have been turned down minimum wage jobs. How are they going to eat and support themselves and their families? How is the next generation going to survive?

Speaking of the next generation, education has a huge impact on our future. Starting in grade school, the emphasis on the English department needs to increase. Many kids go through school without the basic reading skills. The emphasis on the learning of a second language should also increase. It will be really helpful in the diversifying of the Unites States. Another education issue that needs a little bit more attention is Financial Aid. In the transition from high school to college, many high school students have to decide which college they are going to go to. Many choose which college because of financial issues instead of which one they really want to go to. Or, some may not go because of those financial issues. Those students should have that choice.
The United States really needs some help. As the 44th president of the United States, you are the one to help it. First things first the war on terror needs to be handled. It will help everyone feel safe again. Then, the economy and education come next. Every issue is dependant on each other. Once everything gets handled, the United States will be stable again.

I support you completely and hope that you handle everything in a good manner.
Sincerely,
Valerie Washington

1 comment:

Ms. Wiesner said...

He knows this, you don't need to tell him: "Being President is a big responsibility and you have many things to look forward to."

the people are looking forward to making the changes?

Two spaces after a period

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You talk about terrorism and racism in the same paragraph. They deserve their own paragraphs.

I agree: "emphasis on the learning of a second language should also increase"